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Poetry Friday: A Dark, Dark Cave

October 14, 2016April 16, 2017 Jane the Raincity Librarian Post a comment

A Dark, Dark Cave

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An intrepid brother and sister duo explores a dark, dark cave filled with strange and wondrous sights and sounds in this beautifully poetic celebration of the power of a child’s imagination.

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Hoffman’s spare, rhyming text draws readers deeper and deeper into the story, using the repetitive phrase “a dark, dark cave” to encourage young readers to read along and participate.

The pale moon glows

as a cold wind blows

through a dark, dark cave.

Bats in flight

disappear from sight

in a dark, dark cave.

As the children progress through the cave, their surroundings seem to grow darker, and smaller, and spookier….until a surprise visit from dad reveals that the cave is actually constructed from chairs and blankets strewn around the living room, and has been brought to life through the imagination of our young explorers!

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This fun, creative story will hopefully inspire young readers to create their own magical worlds to explore together, and is a wonderful celebration of unplugged, independent, child-led play.

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  1. Robyn Hood Black says:
    October 14, 2016 at 9:45 am

    Oh, this looks/sounds SO kid-friendly! Such a fun concept with intriguing, lyrical words. Thanks for sharing!

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    1. Jane the Raincity Librarian says:
      October 16, 2016 at 2:35 pm

      You’re very welcome, thanks for visiting! 🙂

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  2. Michelle Heidenrich Barnes says:
    October 14, 2016 at 12:08 pm

    This sounds like the kind of book my children would have LOVED when they were younger. Thanks for the peek!

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    1. Jane the Raincity Librarian says:
      October 16, 2016 at 2:35 pm

      It’s so much fun, and so kid friendly. 🙂

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  3. lindabaie says:
    October 14, 2016 at 1:34 pm

    This may be just the Halloween book for my granddaughters, Jane. It sounds terrific. Thanks for sharing–new to me!

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    1. Jane the Raincity Librarian says:
      October 16, 2016 at 2:36 pm

      It’s a perfect Halloween book – a little spooky, but not too spooky. 😉

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  4. mbhmaine says:
    October 14, 2016 at 4:19 pm

    This book sounds perfectly delightful! I can just hear the chorus of spellbound kids chiming in “in a dark, dark cave.” Thanks for sharing!

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    1. Jane the Raincity Librarian says:
      October 14, 2016 at 8:59 pm

      Yes, I love repetitive refrains, they’re such a great way to get kids hooked on a story! 🙂

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  5. Irene Latham says:
    October 14, 2016 at 7:47 pm

    I love that in ends up being a homemade, imaginary cave! A great gift would be this book and a couple of sheets. 🙂 Thank you for sharing.

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    1. Jane the Raincity Librarian says:
      October 14, 2016 at 8:58 pm

      Oh, what a fun idea!! We do a family fort night program at the library and it’s a lot of fun – we provide tables and sheets, and families build little tents and read picture books together, very sweet!

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      1. Brenda Davis Harsham says:
        October 16, 2016 at 4:50 am

        What an awesome idea! My kids would have LOVED that. I love the book, too. Makes me remembering being a little kid and hiding. Giggling. Hiding.

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  6. dmayr says:
    October 15, 2016 at 8:05 am

    A good choice for story hours! And I like that you actually build tents at your library, Jane!

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    1. Jane the Raincity Librarian says:
      October 16, 2016 at 2:37 pm

      Our family fort nights are so much fun, and they’re really easy to do, which is definitely something I look for in a library program! 😉

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  7. Heidi Mordhorst says:
    October 16, 2016 at 4:19 am

    Oooh, a companion to “A Dark, Dark Tale”! And I adore books about how to play, like “Roxaboxen” and “Mattland”. Thanks, Jane!

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    1. Jane the Raincity Librarian says:
      October 16, 2016 at 2:37 pm

      Yes! Unstructured play is such an important part of a healthy childhood!

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  8. Tara Smith says:
    October 16, 2016 at 5:02 am

    What a perfect book to teach with and enjoy!

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